I finished the final revision of the documented argument essay and it feels real good to get that load off my shoulders. I tried to follow Dr. Lorde’s suggestions, comments, and corrections as well as I could have. One thing that I did do which I mentioned in my previous entry, was to cut a lot of the information out. I knew that I was babbling and rambling on and on to build the info (and space), but now I took some time to cut the fat. I kept the parts which pertained to my revised thesis where I stated that transsexuals should retain the right to pro-create.
